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A.Conder
2011-01-20 00:36:22
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magicsonata
2011-01-12 17:10:34
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moolis
2011-01-12 10:43:51
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NancyW
2011-01-12 07:05:36
dank paneled cave, perspiration, corpulent, indebted to the devil himself... Seems a bit over dramatic... not sure about this one as a "page turner"...
Kami K
2011-01-07 10:23:40
Great writing, interesting characters and subject matter.
Sumayyah
2011-01-06 18:18:45
Interesting... The grammar/spelling is mostly fine besides an inconsistent capitalization of Negro. The taste of plot we get is intriguing. The opening description is good.
ConnorJ
2010-12-25 13:34:03
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Joan Lerner
2010-12-24 13:01:33
Intriguing. Am interested in what happens next.
snouv
2010-12-17 11:19:12
Pretty good.
francesca
2010-12-06 08:37:58
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jeff adams
2010-12-03 11:22:21
This piece strikes me as top writing-excellent!
cliff stewart
2010-11-26 11:21:01
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Dave
2010-11-24 11:32:21
Reads as if it's going somewhere at an easy canter.
MA
2010-11-24 11:15:19
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AdamL
2010-11-23 14:13:21
Ah, all the cliches of the Southern lawyer present and correct! Decide whether 'negro' should be capitalised or not. It feels too familiar and run of the mill to pull me in.
16slams@gmail.com
2010-11-21 07:43:13
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Luka
2010-11-20 17:50:43
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Charli
2010-11-20 12:16:22
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Patricia
2010-11-18 10:39:39
reminds me of To Kill a Mockingbird
ozzie-krill
2010-11-17 18:48:49
Like the Style ! Reminded me of a scene of To Kill a Mocking Bird. Well described and I seriously want to read more.
Steven Axelrod
2010-11-17 09:03:22
A tad lush and trite in the descriptions (the cloying ingratiation sitting like 'curdled milk in my stomach'; 'a drawl as thick as the air pressing against us.' But the situation is instantly gripping and many details (the room smells of m old and cigarettes-- what a combo!) ignite on the page. This could be a John Grisham thriller. Good work.
sukerichu
2010-11-17 07:28:17
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tingletlc
2010-11-17 02:45:59
I want to keep reading at least until I have a handle on the identity of the first-person narrator. Good evocation of a close, oppressive environment in unsavory circumstances.
beth
2010-11-16 19:20:49
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S Dawson
2010-11-16 09:25:31
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baboo
2010-11-15 08:16:53
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Krista
2010-11-11 00:49:35
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sz
2010-11-08 10:01:35
the sentences are so loaded... try to simplify and shorten
Connie
2010-11-07 17:44:53
Curious to see what happens net. Whether I would buy depends on how the story portrays Southerners.
Desertfish
2010-11-07 10:32:49
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